I also found it quite annoying that rather than just not swearing, she would go all.. “that thing he does with his… *interruption*” Or the one that really got me. It felt a little immature to me. Very teen. Either use swears and ‘dirty’ words, or don’t, there’s really no need to hint. this paragraph to got me think something in my life I love going back to change rubbish life type books
